Tears of Love 
FASCINATING TEARDROPS
ROLL OVER CHEEKS
TRUTH REVEALED
TRUTH I SEEK
CLEAR AND BLUE
DOWN THEY STREAK
INTO THE LIGHT
WE ALL SHALL PEEK
MY MIND DISTORTED
WEARY AND WEAK
MY HEART IS OPEN
OPEN AND MEEK
WATERY CLOUDS
FROM EYES THAT LEAK
FEELINGS SURROUNDED
BY MUCH MYSTIQUE
SOME MIGHT SAY
THAT I’M A FREAK
BUT I KNOW love
IS NOT UNIQUE
THIS IS THE TRUTH
THE TRUTH I SPEAK
WITH love MY LIFE
NO LONGER BLEAK
© 2009
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This is amaaaaazing. Your really really good. Your better than i am at ryming.
Thank you. You are very sweet.
thank you =D
Nice. The lack of punctuation and ALMOST all caps really adds effect… making me stop and think how it should flow… how it makes sense in my own head… and yet.. still doesn’t quite make sense.. because.. I have trouble believing anyone who tells me that I should believe them. >;/
Enjoyed this…. so, thank you Dakasky….