Comments on: Swim On http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/08/14/swim-on/ The written words of one enigmatic lunatic known as DakaSky Tue, 17 Feb 2015 18:06:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.39 By: dakasky http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/08/14/swim-on/#comment-47 Fri, 14 Aug 2009 22:40:34 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=185#comment-47 Damn Motherfuckin’ hooks! Always. And the hooks are in me deep. I’m trying to get them out without doing too much damage. ha ha!

]]> By: dakasky http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/08/14/swim-on/#comment-46 Fri, 14 Aug 2009 22:39:37 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=185#comment-46 Thanks Nisa. Your words mean much to me. Alluring… wow. Who knew?

]]> By: Samantha http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/08/14/swim-on/#comment-45 Fri, 14 Aug 2009 22:30:22 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=185#comment-45 this sparks deep thoughts… and many questions…
…. and, makes me want to feed your fishes over there —————->
=)

I love the idea and visual of a “A kaleidoscope of memories dancing”…

But, those hooks…
those darn hooks..

There’s always a hook… isn’t there?

]]> By: Nisa West http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/08/14/swim-on/#comment-44 Fri, 14 Aug 2009 22:23:59 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=185#comment-44 So alluring… I like this one a lot daka…

There’s always a string
Always pain
Yet I am tempted

I paddle through
confusion

Muddied minds
and thick waters
are not ideal
for living… – Love these lines!

Well written Dear Poet…

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