Comments on: Ghosts of Memories Past

By: Rec

Rec — Sun, 02 May 2010 17:15:59 +0000

Definitely echoes how I’m feeling lately…

By: JK Fowler

JK Fowler — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 14:51:08 +0000

Hi there. Thought you might enjoy this: http://jkfowler.com/2009/11/23/pasts/ . Cheers, JK

By: bittersweetie95

bittersweetie95 — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 21:01:05 +0000

To me is a mixture of both….spooky and honest and real because in away you can relate and in another you can’t. The honest and real part makes you see the simularities, the spooky part is that you can’t…. in some ways it’s spooky ’cause it’s unpredictable…

By: Nisa West

Nisa West — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 01:56:38 +0000

I find this more real and honest than scary. Of course, memories within the thinking mind can be frightening, but your words- dark may they be- shed light. This poem is such a great reflection of the human memory trap…

By: barbarianella

barbarianella — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 13:35:10 +0000

Spooky. I think your use of repetition helped build up the tension in this piece.

By: dakasky

dakasky — Sun, 26 Jul 2009 19:08:36 +0000

Oh! Scary indeed. Apparently, there are skeletons (and chunks of rotting flesh) in this closet that my brain blocked out.

By: Samantha

Samantha — Sun, 26 Jul 2009 16:27:31 +0000

nice write. eerie… makes me think of skeletons in the closet, or perhaps just life’s little regrets… that we all have….