Comments on: She is the Flow http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/22/she-is-the-flow/ The written words of one enigmatic lunatic known as DakaSky Tue, 17 Feb 2015 18:06:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.39 By: Jessie http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/22/she-is-the-flow/#comment-24 Wed, 01 Jul 2009 05:53:53 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=91#comment-24 I think this poem is great as it is, but I feel like
“Understanding
the true and precious nature of ants

and that they are wonderful communicators
not to mention
good friends to have”
are kind of superfluous verses. The poem would flow just as well and achieve the same sentiment without those lines.

Nonetheless, pretty words.

]]> By: Nisa http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/22/she-is-the-flow/#comment-23 Thu, 25 Jun 2009 23:41:10 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=91#comment-23 This poem makes me want to go jump in Mother Ocean!

]]> By: matheikal http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/22/she-is-the-flow/#comment-22 Tue, 23 Jun 2009 01:56:04 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=91#comment-22 Nice poem. Once you know the flow… Yes, that’s it.
http://www.matheikal.wordpress.com

]]>