Comments on: Tongue http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/ The written words of one enigmatic lunatic known as DakaSky Tue, 17 Feb 2015 18:06:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.39 By: Jesse http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/#comment-3352 Tue, 17 Feb 2015 18:06:56 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-3352 My favorite part too. We all catch ourselves saying mean things. It’s stoping once we catch ourselves that matters!

]]> By: Samantha http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/#comment-18 Tue, 21 Jul 2009 05:08:07 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-18 great piece. I especially loved the part:

“Death to everyth….
No – Wait ! WAIT !”

And, how it then turned from negative to positive – so quickly. gotta love a happy ending once in a while. 😉

]]> By: 47whitebuffalo http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/#comment-17 Tue, 23 Jun 2009 04:27:43 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-17 the power of tongue—indeed..
and the images in tthe photo-nice ‘illustration’–enjoying your work here…

]]> By: barbarianella http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/#comment-16 Mon, 22 Jun 2009 13:06:57 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-16 ‘Often things are best conveyed
Without tongue in action
Silently say
nothing
nothing
ssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh…’

So true.I enjoyed this poem. You’re definitely not tongue tied.

]]> By: Nisa http://www.poems-dakasky.com/2009/06/20/tongue/#comment-15 Sun, 21 Jun 2009 21:02:54 +0000 http://dakasky.wordpress.com/?p=81#comment-15 Nice work here Sir Dakasky. I especially like:

“the strongest
muscle of all
could shoot words of death
like a cannonball
BOOM-BOOM-BOOM-BOOM
soft and slimy
able to taste
yet words are spoken
with waste & haste
Death to the lies
Death to the hate
Death to everyth….
No – Wait ! WAIT !”

:) I like what you have to say… – Nisa

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